Monday, May 2, 2011

raymonds run character sketch

(Raymond)

I am mentally broken but I don't care. I have my sister to help take care of me and she is a good runner. I love my little sister and she loves me and always helps me whenever I need help. She told me of a plan that she had for me to be a runner too. I will run and run and run as much as I need to so she will be proud of me.

Friday, March 18, 2011

personification

school laptops

The laptops reach out to you to use them. they claim that they are perfect. Then they betray you by not working properly or just not working at all. The internet claims it has high speeds but it takes forever to start. After it decides it has been bad long enough it will work but very slowly.

Monday, February 21, 2011

The weekend (school assingment)

Over the weekend I was playing on my mom's Iphone and i downloaded a game called Carnivores: Dinosaur Hunt. It had a few glitches here and there but one really made me angry. What happened was I was hunting some herbivores and I had it set for no carnivores it be in the area. After I had my largest stegosaurus kill ever (12.8 meters) and when I ran to find another kill a predator appeared out of nowhere and killed me before i could shoot it.

Tuesday, January 11, 2011

ski club

(insert sarcastic voice here) "The best thing" happened to me on my school ski trip.(end sarcastic voice here) when I was on the ski lift i lost my right ski half way up the tallest hill and i nearly hit someone with it. i dropped my other ski at the top and proceeded to collect my ski then i had to go down the hill carrying my ski to the other one. i managed to fall when going down the hill. i spent like 20 min trying to get both my skis back. When i finally got my ski back people were making fun of me and trying to drop snow on my head.

Wednesday, December 1, 2010

characters of speak.

Imagine that you are a teenage girl who tends to be an outsider. You were at a party with beer and some one hands you a cup with beer and you drink it; you drink some more cups of beer. After some time passes this guy asks you to dance with him and you do. Speak is a remarkable tale about a girl who is hated by everyone.

Melinda the main character was a girl that had a hard time in school, she couldn't do well in most of her classes, she didn't like talking, and most people hate her for something she did. The few people who did like her were not popular but i will talk about them later. She claims that she doesn't care about what others thought about her but i think she does and is denying it.

Heather is one of Melinda's friends and she was the new kid in the school. I call heather the chameleon because she just want to blend in with everyone. She is a bad friend; she left Melinda to be part of a group that doesn't even seam to even like her very much; they just use her to do their work for them.

David is a guy that is also friends with Melinda and he was nice to her. i have nothing bad to say about him, he seems like a good guy. when he becomes friends with Melinda, she is skeptical about him but she gets over it and starts to like him. overall i think David is the best non-main character in the story.

Melinda lives a very depressing life and i don't know how she did that without running away or something. She seams to have a lot of potential but never seams to try using it. Speak is a masterful story.

Tuesday, October 26, 2010

another story

"I hate this day."said Jacob (he had no last name) "Well you better get over it, you aint ever getting out again!" said a driver of the transport. Then Jacob said "Just try and stop me." "IS THAT A THREAT!" yelled the driver. "No its a promise" Jacob said with a little gloating in his voice. a girls voice came from the back of the truck where there is no light "Can i come too." "NO" the driver said " I CANT LET YOU GUYS LEAVE!" Then the girl started to cry.

"Do you have to be so mean she is only a little girl!" Jacob said with some anger in his voice. "i don't care you have broken out three time this week and its only Monday." the diver laughing while he said it. "how about i make it fore this week" Jacob said smiling. "What, no don't even try this truck is made of a stronger material than normal." the driver said "you broke my last eight each stronger than the last." "Cant i at least try?" Jacob asked. "NO" the driver yelled. " Hey girl whats your name?" Jacob asked. she stopped crying and said "Maya, why?" "you may want to get down on the ground now!" Jacob said loud but steady. Then long sharp blades grew out of the back of his wrists, but they didn't look like metal they looked like some orange stone like object. so she got down and put her hands on her head.

The driver slams on the brakes, Jacob falls on his hands and knees. he gets right back up and makes a slash at the door but before he hits the door the driver slams the gas to repeat the falling over but it didn't work the blade goes right through the door and the lock. "$#!+" the driver yelled as Jacob fell out the door Maya following. The driver slams the brakes again but this time the truck crashes and flips over. "longest lasting hunter this year" Jacob said with a smirk on his face while he retracts his blades. "You killed him" Maya said frightened by what she saw.

"Don't worry about him he will be fine" Jacob said calmly. The driver then kick open the driver seat door and gets out with a gun and starts shooting it at Jacob and Maya. "This time i have the right to use lethal force." the driver said angrily. Jacob then forced out the blades and made them into armor around his body to protect him and Maya. the driver stops shooting and says "Just let me take you back to your jail cell." "NO" Jacob said "I will never go back there." then he grabs Maya and jumps about 20 yards and keeps jumping with Maya in his arms.

When they get a few miles away from the driver they stop to rest."so why do they have you? what is you mutation?" Jacob asked. "i don't want to talk about it" Maya said in a split second.




I will continue the story if i get 20 comments by different people by the end of December.

Monday, October 18, 2010

does patitatism still matter


i don't know. because they gave there lives for us. Patriotism is a love and devotion to one's country It has had different meanings over time and its meaning is highly dependent upon context, geography, and philosophy.

these are just answers to some questions i had to answer.