Monday, February 21, 2011

The weekend (school assingment)

Over the weekend I was playing on my mom's Iphone and i downloaded a game called Carnivores: Dinosaur Hunt. It had a few glitches here and there but one really made me angry. What happened was I was hunting some herbivores and I had it set for no carnivores it be in the area. After I had my largest stegosaurus kill ever (12.8 meters) and when I ran to find another kill a predator appeared out of nowhere and killed me before i could shoot it.
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3 comments:

  1. SamMarch 4, 2011 at 8:14 AM

    I can really relate to you in this piece; I also have this game and it can be quite suspenseful. To make this piece greater that it is already, maybe try some analogies or some advanced language techniques.

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  2. Abby B.March 4, 2011 at 8:16 AM

    I enjoyed this piece, but maybe you could do something interesting, like pretend you are in the game? That would be very cool! But, good job!

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  3. UnknownMarch 4, 2011 at 8:21 AM

    I agree with Abby but I also can relate to it and how video games can be very suspenseful.
    Nice Job.

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